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Error Message - Unknown Planet by Angelicangel69 Error Message - Unknown Planet by Angelicangel69
This was slightly different from the rest but meh. Anyway this has been in my head all day and i am also making a wee short story out of it of Anders and Anita. So this one here i want to see how you would all respond to it. I want to see something interesting something i'm not expecting. I'm kind of edging to the giants again as normal but still you can have it an alien or any creature you want to think of. I better say what this wee error is about as well. Remember your that creature not the lassie. Okay i shall begin!
Story~
The woman was on a mission to find new planet to use as back whenever one of the other planets might be destroyed because of all the wars. Sadly her ship had a malfunction. Crashing into this unknown land. Luckily for her she survived but her ship didn't. Using what she could find on the ship and decided to make a video log. The huge elks that wonder around her ship are 16 foot tall. They are harmless and don't mind her.

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:iconbuizelking01:
BuizelKing01 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015
May I try this out please?
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes of course. 
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:iconbuizelking01:
BuizelKing01 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015
Hmm... May I be... Giant Buizel? At 300ft if it okay? or smaller? or do you want me to be something else?
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Maybe slightly smaller but other than that, i am fine with that. 
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:iconbuizelking01:
BuizelKing01 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015
Well is 250ft is acceptable? and should I start it off?
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah thats fine, and yeah that would be great dear. 
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:iconbuizelking01:
BuizelKing01 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015
The ground starting shaking and get stronger as the creature get closer... A shadow was starting to come over the ship. The creature saw it and then tilt his head, he slowly walk towards it.
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Anita stayed in her ship. Whatever was out there. She was going to wait until it went away. Didn't know what it was, she looked out the window. Great, it was head towards her. Cursing under her breath, she didn't know what to do. Ship was wrecked, and it wouldn't work. Gun in her holster, she was ready to use it. Tiny gun against that creature? Well, it might run off. 
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StarfallVulpixGirl Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Suddenly, I let out a large growl and leap down from the trees. I'm a large winged jaguar. I let out a terrifying roar
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She turned around to see the huge jaguar creature. Cursing under her breath, she took a runner. Hopping off her ship, she ran into her ship closing the door behind her. Stuck in her own ship while that wing creature was out there. 
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StarfallVulpixGirl Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I roar and start breaking at parts of the ship with my teeth and claws. I'm determined to get through and catch my prey
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Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"My ship!" She couldn't believe what that damn creature was doing to her precious ship. Trying to find something heavy and hard to throw at it. She found a spanner then went around to get a good shot. She didn't want to get caught by this cat. She chucked it. 
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StarfallVulpixGirl Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I fly up and tackle the woman. I swipe the weapon from her hands and growl at her
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She gasped in surprised when the creature tackled her. The weapon was out her hand now. She glared at the cat. "God to do better than that" she muttered as she took a step back. Had to make distance between them. 
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StarfallVulpixGirl Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I tackle her once more and pin her to the ground. I growl right in her face
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cursing she just glared up to the cat who pinned her. She bared her own teeth at the cat. She just continues to stare at the cat. 
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:iconcassandra2012:
Cassandra2012 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
Sara felt the ground shake
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:iconsaracusthesarai:
SaracustheSarai Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(What kind of creature can it be?)
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(It can be any creature you wish it to be from mythical creature, aliens to your own creation)
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:iconsaracusthesarai:
SaracustheSarai Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(Cool! Who do I be?)
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(Anything you want to be)
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:iconsaracusthesarai:
SaracustheSarai Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(Alright...I guess I'll be the beast. OH! I have a perfect idea. I'll be a Gargerathan. ^^)
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(Don't know what a Gargerathan is but alright. So start when you are ready)
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SaracustheSarai Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(Hehe! ^^ Search for it in my gallery. It's my own creature.)

*You hear a loud roar.*
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:iconsweettooth97:
sweettooth97 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
(Im interested by this one but what creature do you accept and how tall you want them to be ?)
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(I am fine with any height i shall reply to the note you have gave)
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:iconsweettooth97:
sweettooth97 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
(yeah sorry about that its on notes )
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(No don't worry about it)
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:iconsweettooth97:
sweettooth97 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
(alright )
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:iconmaho97:
Maho97 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
Both
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Will need more than one word reply.
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:iconmaho97:
Maho97 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
fine then uhm I shall carry on and the ground rumbles and i hear a faint growling (HAPPY!?)
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are the creature in this. So it would be you who makes the growling, hissing or the ground shaking. Please no ruddiness either. 
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:iconmaho97:
Maho97 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
Oh i thought I would be the person
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nope, its says it in the box. 
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:iconapcdrawings:
APCDrawings Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student Writer
Both
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She looked around wondering for a moment what it was. Couldn't see anything around her, only can guess the creature was gone. The elks weren't around for once. That maybe one of the sign she should consider, to go back in her ship.
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APCDrawings Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Writer
(Can we switch?)
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(I don't do switches dear sorry)
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:iconapcdrawings:
APCDrawings Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Student Writer
Awww...then let's continue :C
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(Okay dokie it your turn)
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:iconapcdrawings:
APCDrawings Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Writer
I stomped more towards her.
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She backed away not liking this. Cursing under her breath as she knew it would try to stomp on her ship.
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horserax Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
the ground started shacking
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She looked around confused for a moment, thinking it was one of the giant elks but they all ran off. She was on top of her ship trying to fix it. What was it that was coming her way? 
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horserax Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
a giant alien crecher came out of the woods adn looked down at the ship. the alian semed to be mail jusgikng by the human like body shape. it had brite blue shin. long ears pointed teath and fang shpowing from the mouth. he had long purpal haior down to his upoper back. he had a long tail with a cureved spiek on its tip. and clawed feet and hands. it had no clothing on and you coudlent see enyhting in its *down below area*
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Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She turned to see a giant alien standing there. Cursing to under her breath, she backed away from him. This isn't good. This wasn't what she needed right now. Her eyes darted about trying to find somewhere, where she could hide. Her ship was a sitting duck. It was also broken, so she can't really fly it. Hoping he would just walk on by. Standing up, she put her spanner in her back pocket, slowly backing away from him. Only her option right now was to run. If she can get a head start, she might able to be safe.
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:iconhorserax:
horserax Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
giant alien: Ugualaza... azelexasa? alawquenti! (unknown speak) *reches down to her*
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:iconangelicangel69:
Angelicangel69 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Her eyes widen as she then turn to make a run for it. She jumped off her ship and sprinted through the open land towards the trees.
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horserax Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*moves ship out of way*
alian: gra- wuaxi, hanahanak! *starts chaseing you*
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